Looking at language
Word level
The vocabulary for each story is provided in alphabetical lists. Words which recur more than twice are shown in bold.
Given that the text for both levels of the stories is provided in electronic format, it is easy to create gap-filling tasks. For example:
The sheep were tired now. It was a good game. Now it was time to go _____.
So they went home, _____ their tails behind them.
Where was Bo Peep? She wasn't in the _____. The sheep were _____.
They wanted some love, that's all.
Bo Peep was _____. She dreamed about _____. She dreamed about good sheep that do not get _____.
'Baa!' said Molly. Bo Peep _____ her eyes. There were her sheep, standing next to her bed. 'Naughty sheep!' she said. But she was VERY pleased to see them. |
disappointed |
home |
asleep |
sheep |
lost |
garden |
wagging |
opened |
If pupils are given electronic copies to work on, they too can create gap-filling puzzles for other members of the class. They might be given free choice ("Take out the ten most important words.") or asked to removed verbs or nouns, for example.
Character words - some suggestions
How can we describe Goldilocks? Which is the best word? Arrange the words in order of suitability: (greedy/foolish/adventurous/‚brave . . .)
How does she eat? (Greedily/quickly/messily/noisily . . .)
How does the Crooked Man walk? (Stiffly/creakily/carefully/slowly/awkwardly/quickly/painfully . . .)
Can we find another word for walk? (He shuffles/strides/marches/stumbles . . .)
We can use some more difficult words to describe Edward before he tries catching Old Harry, such as hopeful/optimistic/confident. What others?
What words could we use to describe Old Harry? (fierce/large/angry/clever . . .)
Jack and Jill are always doing things in a hurry. How many synonyms can we find? (Quickly, fast, rapidly/swiftly . . .)
Try using a thesaurus; how many of the suggestions are actually appropriate? There are fewer antonyms; can you find any apart from slowly?
What feelings does Bo Peep display? (Worried/upset/cross/sad . . .)
What words can we use to describe the sheep? (Naughty/playful/adventurous/woolly . . .)
Comparing and contrasting - some ideas
At the beginning of the story the Crooked Man is: unhappy/alone/poor/crooked, but at the end of the story he is happy/not alone/rich/straight . . .
At the start of the story, Daddy Bear is hungry. Later he is angry.
Edward is foolish/timid but Old Harry is clever/fierce.
At the start of Bo Peep's story the sheep are happy to run away but at the end....
Jack starts off .... but he ends up ......
Adjectives
These are some of the adjectives in the harder version of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5: clever deep delicious famous fast glass little loud old poor sharp shiny strong tall wriggly young.
Questions that might be asked:
Who is clever? Who is tall? What is sharp? What is wriggly?
Now get pupils to make up their own questions using adjectives from the story.
Use the same technique in other stories. Pupils could make the list of adjectives themselves.
Sentence level
Having read the simple level text how would pupils extend the language and give more detail? What additional words could they insert into some of the sentences? Which words could they swap for better, more interesting ones?
For some pupils it will be appropriate to read some pages of the simple version, then the same pages in the harder version. Having read some more of the story in the simple version they can try to write or say their own more complex version of a page or two.
If each page had four lines of text instead of two, what might be written on the extra line of each page? |